Catharsis
August 6, 2011 at 3:51 am 8 comments
I poured out my heart to him,
He wrung it and put it to dry,
I struggled with tears in my eye,
He looked with pity and heaved a sigh.
I tried to be a woman all strong
Knowing healing would take mighty long.
I walked away with a smile,
Seeing the yard be the mile.
Oh you naive heart,
Why get attached, only to fall apart?
PS1 : Any attempt at a situational comparison would be a purely random musing.
Ps2 : A lot of things seem to come at odd hours.
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Anonymous | August 8, 2011 at 1:48 pm
Inspired by Adele – Rolling down the deep?
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Aakanksha | August 8, 2011 at 5:17 pm
Hadn’t heard Adele before. Her song seems to have a vengeful note…
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Namrata | August 10, 2011 at 10:10 pm
I don’t have a single poetic cell in my body, but I am a sucker for good poetry. Especially when the rhyming is not forced
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Aakanksha | August 20, 2011 at 9:21 am
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Aniket | August 20, 2011 at 12:58 pm
This could be a great song, with keyboard playing in the background
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Aakanksha | November 7, 2011 at 11:28 am
Shouldn’t there be more lines for it to be a song?
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Ravali | September 11, 2011 at 10:23 pm
Nice one !
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Aakanksha | November 7, 2011 at 11:27 am
Thanks